[ZDP] BackTalk to Document The Zope Book (2.5 Edition)/Introducing Zope

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    Zope is a framework for building web applications.  A web application
    is a computer program that users access with a web browser over the
    Internet.  You can also think of a web application as a dynamic web
    site that provides not only static information to users but lets them
    use dynamic tools to work with an application.

      % Anonymous User - May 30, 2002 7:29 pm:
       Should be "... a framework for building a special kind of web application. Generally, a web application is a
       computer program accessed with a web browser; the special kind of web applications built with the framework
       provided by Zope can also be thought of as dynamic web sites that both provide static information to users
       and allow those users to work with dynamic tools." Or something: at a minimum, change "provides not only" to
       "not only provides". JEL

      % Anonymous User - Aug. 22, 2002 2:06 pm:
       Whomever keeps correcting the grammer out here ... you need to get a life !!! It sounds just fine to me ....

      % Anonymous User - Aug. 31, 2002 6:03 pm:
       Should be "_Whoever_ keeps correcting the _grammar_ . . . "

      % Anonymous User - Sep. 5, 2002 10:10 am:
       nuff said.

      % Anonymous User - Oct. 3, 2002 2:20 pm:
       I think the first suggestion is actually crisper and more informative.