[ZDP] BackTalk to Document The Zope Book (2.6 Edition)/Introducing
Zope
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A comment to the paragraph below was recently added via http://zope.org/Documentation/Books/ZopeBook/2_6Edition/IntroducingZope.stx#2-12
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Many application servers allow you perform some of the below-mentioned
tasks.
% Anonymous User - Apr. 17, 2004 1:46 am:
Should be:
Many application servers allow you to perform some of the below-mentioned tasks.
% Anonymous User - June 13, 2004 12:46 am:
Shouldn't it be "following tasks" and not "below-mentioned tasks"? The former is clearly easier to read and
comprehend than the latter, which is just an awkward construction.
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